I loved it (: it was amazing and well put together. I would've never imagioned one of the guys especially Kennedy to go check up on her after she yelled at them. It was a cute moment and I really really loved it. I understand about the whole update thing. I just updated one of my stories after two months and there's another one that's about to go on for three months. I don't have the time or the inspiration to write chapters at the moment. It's sad ): But as long as this story is updated I'll be super happy! It's worth the wait.
gahhh! i love this story<3 Its sad to see her go through so much pain /: btw, in the last chapter, why was her hand hurting? i know its like hurt or something, but you never said why... i think? and i really liked this new chapter. Flashbacks are the best<3 I can't wait for the next update, oh and i read your Alex one-shot and i loved it (: pure genius!
Love that Garrett calls Grey sissy, I still call my sister that even though I am the older one. Also, glad they finally recognize her. Stupid boys.
In the latest chapter I found that I really want to punch her mom in the face. Double standards are the worst. Ugh. Love that Kennedy was so sweet, love that the flashbacks are leading up to their relationship. Super cute as always. Can't wait for more!
I like the new shindig (; when I got the update thing I was like what story is this? Then I checked it out and was oh? Its been changed! Well I like it (: oh and thank you and I wish you a big good luck!!!!
I loved this chapter flashback. It gave more info about grey. Like how Garrett did what he wanted and rarely got in trouble and grey always got in trouble unless Garrett said something that saved her ass. I get how that can be annoying. And I understand the card thing. My parents did the same exact thing to me on my 13th and 14th birthday. I'm turning 16 soon, so it wasn't that long ago. Pft, parents. Can't wait for the next update!
Aww this was super cute. I like the growth that we see from Grey in these flashbacks. Also, her parents are terrible, this emotional abuse is just as bad as hitting your kids. Anyways, these flashbacks make it so bad that Kennedy can't recognize Grey.
Ooh and happy to hear that this ties to the Garrett story but it takes place after that one. Ooh and for my birthday this year my parents gave me a card referencing my non-existent child. My mother will never live this down!
That last line was interesting, "I won't become another tour whore", glad she is sticking up for herself. Although, how freaking stupid can these boys be? Garrett not recognizing his own sister? Has she changed that much from when he last saw her? Slightly confused by that. I like that she has the friend vibe with John, seems cute.
eleven: Loved your description of laser tag (actually makes me want to go and play it again). Wondering what's going to happen next? Loved the kiss scene. Can't wait to read the next update/flashback chapter.
ten: First off, that dress is SO cute but it's kinda odd seeing as she's in seventh grade and wearing something that an eleventh grader would wear. But i still love it. The descriptions were perfect and love how she was introduced to john. Wondering what's happening next.
nine: Liked the descriptions and the whole hanging out portion of this. Wondering how long before Garrett realizes that's his older sister? His other friends before realizing it as well? Can't wait to read what happens in the flashback.
eight: LOVED the cuteness and sibling bonding that was going on in this chapter. The descriptions were awesome and i loved how he stood up for his sister. Wondering what's going to happen in the next chapter.
seven: Liked how she covered Kenndy's eyes only to have hers later covered by her brothers. Wondering what's going to happen in the flashback? Can't wait to find out.
six: another awesome flashback. Loved the descriptions of it all and the semi-bond they both had other the bass guitar. Wondering what's happening in the present?