The Sounds of a Lock - Comments

I love this. You have to update. It keeps you guessing.

Makes you really think about what actually happened can't wait for more :)

Makes you really think about what actually happened can't wait for more :)

I remember hearing about this, I seem to have a fascination with all those child kidnapping/murder/rape stories. Same thing with the Holocaust, but enough of that. I love it so far, so keep it up.

ZOMG, I for goosebumps up my spine reading this. You have to update. I have never heard of this story nor of the little girl, so I'm really looking forward to it. PLEASE UPDATE ALREADY! You have me shaking. It was well written and I liked the detail. :) I'm gonna subscribe. And I love how it feels like you put yourself in the little girl's shoes when you were writing this. Keep up the great work. It's amazing. :"D

Subscribing!

Okay, when I first saw this story, I had to look her up. At first, I had no idea who she was, and that this was just an "unimportant kidnapping," but then I I realized who she was. I remember hearing about this story like, a million times, but it always grabs my attention.

Now, on to the story. I really like how you wrote this. I seems so realistic and it just holds my attention. I did not see any grammar or spelling errors, so that's good.

I'm subscribing(:

I love this, Jaycee is my hero. A few facts were mixed up but that's alright. I remember she was going to the bus stop down the road and I think it was a blue car. Small facts but it's whatevs. Anyway, you described this in a way that makes me sad. Not to say your writing is horrible because it's far from that. It's just, Jaycee was so young and you've really put a focus on that. I'm definitely subscribing to this.

I remember this stroy (the actual events I mean).. If you need some help with the actual facts on the case, let me know and I'll help.

I loved this story though and like Scarecrow said, you might want to make the font a little darker. :)

This is very well written. I like your style, it so matter of fact so factual which I like in a true-story-story if that makes sense. The layout is nice, I just wish the font was darker since it is the same colour as the background it was a little distracting. Also I like the last paragraph (not that I like the contect just the way it was written, I'm not pro-abduction in any way) It perfectly describes how I think an 11 year old would react to the situation, and the little bit of foreshadowing makes me want to read more well done :)