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  • Deleted1231412

    Deleted1231412 (100)

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    A little morbid, but i really liked it.
    October 21st, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • Katie_Bugg

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    Wowwers... Grammer problems... Needs some paragraph seperation and other basic editing but as for the actual content, not bad. I actually liked it! Good job babe! :)
    October 7th, 2011 at 01:07am
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