Thick As Blood - Comments

I . . . I had a comment thought out in my head. really, I am.
but then, then I got to the last bit of the update and lost it.
OMG. I can't. I can't! I'll try to leave a better comment when my mind starts working, but as of now, you've left me an emotional mess!

AND RICHARD!

. . . I'd nearly forgotten about him, but please don't let him get hurt.
or if he does, Jimmy will feel like one massive dick, but please don't hurt him :(

I just . . . I have a lot of emotions going through me right now.
I'm genuinely concerned for Cecelia and her baby.
Fucking Rothstein better not try to force an abortion on her, because only a woman should decide whether or not that’s right for her and in this situation she needs to keep her baby, she needs to run away to Wisconsin with Richard and have a farm beside Emma’s so they can be one big happy family.
AYE! When I get really worked up, my thoughts switch into Spanish mode.
So I’ll end this comment with a gift . . .

dont kill the baby, I don't want to cry super hard! OMFG Richard better go get her or ima punch in the face through my computer!

Updatey goodness!!! Loved it!

I want to give Jimmy a good ol’ fashioned Goodfellas style beating. Ugh! He is so infuriating. I can’t believe how selfish he is. He doesn’t want anyone to take the attention from him so he has Cecelia taken away by Rothstein. He’s making sweet Richard suffer. FUCK! ALL THE CRIES! That part about Richard imagining a family with Cecelia just made me cry. OMG! I can’t take this. I can’t handle this. Jimmy is such a jerk and he’s telling him that she was nothing but a whore. AND then to say that they could teach her a lesson. Fucking prick. Ugh I'm so annoyed with him right now! AND Charlie trying to rape her. that is not alright. I'm a hot mess of emotions this chapter has made me a hot mess. oh I can’t wait until the next update. This is sheer brilliance!

I can honestly say that this is the reaction I have whenever I see that you've updated.

OH NO!
I was happy! So very, very fucking happy and then that ending . . .no, no, no!
What will Richard think? What will Rothstein do?
I'm in shock! I’ve even put on a blanket so I can be in shock, properly

I can’t believe Jimmy! I don’t think I’ve ever been angrier at him. this was uncalled for. He’s a selfish bastard! Bah. I hope you update soon! My sanity depends on it :)

Chapter Sixteen

I have this image of Richard in his army uniform, sitting at a café and watching painters create their masterpieces, stuck in my head. Ah. Such a beautiful image! Awe I'm feeling all bubby after having read Cecelia telling Richard that he’s beautiful and has a kind soul. Ah so sweet! Those two just make me all



OH NO! ROTHSTEIN!
No! No! No! Nothing good can come from him. I was just getting ready to start counting down the days to Cecelia and Richard getting married and now Rothstein’s getting involved. Fuck! FUCKING JIMMY! That puto contacted him! oh no! that is UGH! No. I'm going to be freaking out in the next chapter! I can feel it!

ah! You added a character page!
and can I say that I screamed when I saw you put Marion Cotillard as Cecelia!
Ever since I watched Midnight in Paris, I've been imagining her as Cecelia. :)
now I'll go read the updates!

Chapter Fifteen

I feel like I have to fan myself after reading that steamy fellatio scene. That was fucking hot. I swear I was picturing it happen, that makes me sound pervy, but you write so brilliantly that I just had to picture it! I love the Cecelia told him that she doesn’t want to make things more difficult between him and Jimmy. That makes me care for her even more!

“Stay, she gets herself into this mess, let her get herself out. She’d can’t rely on you for everything.”
Alright, alright, a bat isn’t enough for Jimmy! He needs a beating delivered Casino style by Joe Pesci! I can’t believe the asshole would say something like that. Well, I can believe it, but he shouldn’t be such a dick! AHH Richard saved the day! He’s just such a BAMF! I adore that man! And I adore your writing! It’s brilliant :)

Chapter Fourteen

AHH! I want to punch Jimmy in the face! Okay, not punch, he deserves something worse and more gangster, I want to smack him with a baseball bat! He’s such a prick. Gah. I can’t believe he told Richard that Cecelia manipulated and trained him. bah! Bah to him! awe but Richard has made me happy again. He’s such a sweetheart sending money to his sister. I just want Richard to be happy with Cecelia! Maybe they can get married and move to Wisconsin, where they’ll keep a farm next to his sister’s. wishful thinking and not exciting enough for Cecelia, but I’ll still think it :)

Yes! I'm glad he went back to see Cecelia. For a moment I was freaking out that he was going to completely avoid her like Jimmy had asked, but no, he went back and this is a joyous occasion . . . but, fuck, they’ve been cockblocked. Poor Richard and his bulge :(

THAT FUCKING PRICK HIT HER!!!!
I get that she was taunting him, but fuck, he needs to control himself
And now my being upset at him has transformed into sheer fury!
But I’ll take comfort in remembering how things ended up on Boardwalk for him . . .
The ending to the chapter was brilliant.
I honestly got chills when I read the Not even her own part.
I hope you’re having a very lovely holiday season!

and don't want her son to be raised by Gillian!