Violent Lack of Virtue - Comments

I'm sobbing. This is such a beautiful yet tragic story. <3

i love your stories they are so good do u have pics of the characters

i'm legit crying. i stayed up until 4:17 am. i feel so bad for Andy, but i'm glad he can remember Tess with his baby girl. as much as i love zacky..in this story, he just needed to blow up. a very good story. can't wait to read the next one.

what? why did u kill her for =(

Zacky you basterd how could you? I started crying while reading this...did you have to kill her off?

OHH MY GOD WHAT. WHAT :'( Zacky you bastard :( *tear

OH GOD! I almost cried! I almost cried so hard! But my mom is in the room so I can't. Or else she would stare at me like I'm crazy... My best friend calls me Cupcake! :D

AH I nearly cried reading this sooo sad! but im glad something good came out of it! loved it darling
ooffff to the sequel!

I cried! Why did Zacky have to do that?! WHY?!

I cried reading the last chapter :(
I can't believe that Zacky killed Telsa and her unborn son.

I CANT BELIEVE YOU KILLED TESLA!!!! Nooooo! i cried so hard!

Whoa, whoa, whoa. You KILLED her?! *arm flail of sadness/confused-ness*

no she shouln't die grrrrrrr

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.........
HOW CAN YOU KILL HER????????

What the fuck? He killed her because she didn't want him? Stupid fucker. Why'd she have to die? D: So sad, but at least her daughter was born. Surprise baby. I liked that. Off to read the sequel now. :D

WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!??!?!?!

I so didn't see that coming - she died! Dude, that just.... ok, I'm gonna go read the next part....

HOLY SHIT! 0.0
Did that really happen!!!????
Zacky has truly lost it!
He freaking shot Telsa four times and she was pregnant!!!!
So if he can't have Telsa for himself then nobody can and that's why he shot her.
But the big surprise was that Telsa was carrying twins and the baby girl was holding onto the boy twin so the doctors couldn't detect her.
I literally cried when Telsa died along with her son.
This is an amazing story and I am sad that Telsa wasn't able to live to see her daughter grown up!

Aww she has a beautiful baby shower..I can't wait for the baby to come :D
What!!! Zacky kissed her?? Why I thought he was moving on. Is it possible that he realized that they're might be a chance this baby might be his :O
Oh my gosh I can't wait for the next one

with zacky coming and doing that out of random and me remember the night he kidnapped her, I feel 5% positive that the baby is zackys. I could see that just being a twist or something. Great update!

Ohhhh Andy is gonna kick Zacky's ass! And now I gotta quote Andy:

"Have you ever gotten your ass kicked by a guy wearing mascara? It fucking sucks!"

Haha, update soon doll!