The Valiant Prince - Comments

  • Dark Heart

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    aww I just love this story,made me smile
    its so sweet and I love how it ends :D
    January 27th, 2012 at 10:36pm
  • gar-bage

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    Wonderful! So adorable and sweet, and such a twist on a classic concept. I do love that it opened up with 'once upon a time...', because the best stories always start that way.

    I think the best thing about this was how I could hear someone reading it out to a child at night; that is an impressive use a voice, my friend, and you will go far in writing with that! Great job!
    November 1st, 2011 at 03:12am
  • Sweet.Prince

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    This was just eeper!
    You are just to sweet!
    This is the best birthday present ever and I just want to keep it all to myself.
    <3
    You are the bestest friend ever!
    October 10th, 2011 at 06:54am
  • tiffany danielle

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    This was the cutest thing I have ever read, ohmygod. <33
    Really, this is absolutely adorable and you have the cutest
    little imagination and heart in the whole wide world, sir. <3
    You are welcome to write more fairytales anytime you please!:)
    I will gobble them up and keep their cute memory in my heart.<3
    This is amazing, sir, no steam am I blowing. <3 Absolutely
    cute and fresh and sweet and mmmmmmf. c: I adore this.
    October 8th, 2011 at 09:38am