January 27th, 2012 at 10:36pm
Wonderful! So adorable and sweet, and such a twist on a classic concept. I do love that it opened up with 'once upon a time...', because the best stories always start that way.
I think the best thing about this was how I could hear someone reading it out to a child at night; that is an impressive use a voice, my friend, and you will go far in writing with that! Great job!
its so sweet and I love how it ends :D