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  • Queen of Suburbia

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    I'm loving this story.
    Fushcia's a b*tch in the third chapter though.
    Update please :)
    October 16th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • pardon bell.

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    I love this already!
    Keep writing <3
    October 15th, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • losing control.

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    This is really awesome. Maybe it was the banner, but it definitely reminds me of the whole Quinn transformation on Glee, which I liked. I don't think I've ever read a story like this on here.

    I really liked the banner and the layout, they were simple and not distracting at all which was good. Plus I've always liked layouts that have pink backgrounds, for whatever reason. I liked the summary too. Short, sweet, and awesome.

    I think what I like most about this story is the short-ish chapters. They aren't overly long so I get lost and can't follow along and they aren't too terribly short. They seem just right for the flow of the chapters and what not.

    Speaking of flow, it was awesome. At risk of sounding cheesy, I felt like I was just floating down the river of your words, and it was awesome. Oh man, that sounded worse than I thought, but you get the point.

    I really like Nora/Fuchsia's attitude. It seems very "go out and get 'em" and I really like characters like that.

    Anyways, I'm super excited to see what you do with Fuchsia. She has lots of potential!
    October 12th, 2011 at 03:35am
  • divine;

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    What is this? THIS IS GOOD! You should really continue with this.
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • eight letters late.

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    You should totally write more! You could make "Fuchsia" into an awesome main character.
    October 9th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • not here anymore

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    This was fantastic! I really like it. You have a way with FLOW in this that just takes the reader along.
    Good job!
    October 8th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I liked this. It had a nice flow, layout, idea, and message and was incredibly well presented and worded in my opinion. It made me smile the whole time I was reading it because I really, really liked her "No looking back attitude." She was taking this very, very gracefully, like "what's done is done, I'm me and I'm moving on, not stopping, not hesitating or holding back." I like her confidence - new found or not - and her attitude is just bangin'.<33 This is a wonderful, wonderful drabble and I think you should and have every right to be proud of it. <3 c:
    October 8th, 2011 at 05:56am
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