31 day Prompt Challenge - Comments

I'm not a huge fan of the layout of this, because it doesn't seem to fit the story. Were it a sort of lighter story (and maybe other chapters are, but the first wasn't) I would super like the layout, because it's really cute and you did a good job with it.

I loved how we got Sam's story through his telling of it. I liked that it wasn't just him thinking, but him telling people at an AA meeting. That's a super good way for him to get his story across and it's definitely a different way of doing it than I've seen in the past.

Overall, this was really good. Well do!

I really like your stories. Its nice that people can relate to them.

I like this. I love the idea of touching someone's life and never knowing it.

Errors:
2nd paragraph 2nd line: "amde" should be "made"
3rd paragraph 2nd line: "hten" should be "then"
3rd paragraph 3rd line: "meaningfull" should be "meaningful"
3rd paragraph 5th line: "ti" should be "to"
4th paragraph 2nd sentence, 2nd line: "wisjh" should be "wish"
4th paragraph last line: "strangers should be "stranger's"
6th paragraph: twice in that paragraph you wrote "wouldn't" as "wouldn;t"
7th paragraph 2nd line: "fgo" should be "go"
8th paragraph 1st line: "havn't" should be "haven't"

That's all I saw that got to me, lol.

I really liked the story though, could be one of those one-shots that can be made into a full story though couldn't it? lol. At least to me it could.

Wow that's good. It's a good idea and you have a good writing style. I know how the alcoholic feels because a family member of mine is an alcoholic and blacks out all the time. And sometimes she wakes up to something terrible. She's gotten help as well! This was touching.

Aww, this sounds really sweet! I know this is going to be a bit random but I remember someone at my old high school actually doing something similar, only it was a paper crane. I had found it and kept it because it was a nice message.

Anyways, this is one of the best one shots I've ever read. I just hope you write more for the 31day challenge. :3

I love this! Your a really good writer! I'm thinking about doing this also :).