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  • Fortunate Placement.

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    I need more of this. Now. Right. Freakin'. NOW.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • wristbanger

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    Awwww! Too. Damn. Cute.

    Love the chapter :)
    October 20th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • pocahontas.

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    The layout is so simple, which is really nice. I rarely see GIF banners, so it was nice to see a change. so needs to be capitalized in the summary though.

    The chapter itself was nice and short. The description was great; I could picture it. There was only one mistake I noticed; He stepped up. On step. You mean one, right? The way it ended was so cute. How she walked back, and he followed. It was nice.

    Amazing job, keep it up.

    Xxoo.
    October 9th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • wristbanger

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    I'm squeaking with fucking fan girl happiness. POST. NEXT. CHAPTER.
    October 9th, 2011 at 05:04am
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    This was a short and sweet oneshot. I loved it and how original it was. I have to agree with roux. Your writing style is awesome.
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:25am
  • roux.

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    Know what I found immensely original? How you have her counting the steps between them. I like that. A lot.

    The layout's pretty sweet, and I like the banner. It be pretty.

    Again, your writing style's awesome. I could actually feel how Rose felt, taste the addiction that she had for Draco and think "WTF girl, you know you want him."

    Pshyeah...

    This was a great read. You're an awesome writer.
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • wristbanger

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    BY FUCKING GOD I WANNA BE ROSE.

    T^T but no. I'm just Penny,

    Anywayyss! I absolutely loved this. I was smiling the whole way through. The story was short, sweet, and simple. You have a very clear way of writing and I enjoyed this. The layout was EXTREMELY cute, cause I got to see his face ;D hahaha

    But I did like this, I enjoyed it, and I wish you wrote more! Haha
    October 9th, 2011 at 04:12am
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