WOAH WHERE DID THE PARTY GO?! I'm sorry, I had to, I felt compelled the moment I read the title! The start of this gave me an idea you might want to use so yeah I'll message you that and also this chapter reminded me of a scene from Bones (idek why, it seriously has nothing to do with anything that happened here but yeah) that I'm going to use in my fic and like yes you are a ball of inspiration for me! The papers and the shells omg, that's so sweet of Jack to keep all of that and WE'VE TALKED ABOUT YOUR FLASHBACKS BEFORE OH MY GOD. I seriously imagine everything in my head when I read your writing, like it's so easy omg. The sand fight and omg that whole speech by Alex, I'm sobbing, "I love cheese" - I have tears! This is going to be a long comment wow. Jack's note with the seashells, why do you insist on making me cry?! I want to know what Jack got him omg. The flowers, that made me smile so much omf. HE KISSED HIS CHEEK, I'M NOT OKAY. NO YOU RUINED IT, EVERYTHING WAS ALMOST PERFECT AND THEN DRAMA, GO AWAY AMBER YOU'RE NOT WELCOME HERE. FIX THIS PLEASE. I don't want this to end please don't end it, give us more time please, I will cry I swear I will. This is why you're my fave author, I can't even handle my emotions right now, I love you bye
June 22nd, 2013 at 12:24am