Hey! I'm here from comment swap :) I really love stories about Red Riding Hood, so I was really excited when I read the prologue. This is an interesting take on the story. Its a very unique and cool idea. I really like the story so far. The writing is good for the most part, but maybe in some cases, you might want to work on the word choice. The only real problem I saw with the story is the layout. Its a nice layout, but the words are kinda hard to read. Also, the paragraphs aren't separated in chapter 1, which also makes it a little hard to read. Overall, its a very good story and I really like it :)
August 2nd, 2013 at 10:42pm
