Kiss of a Devil - Comments

Holy Shit, I'm so excited for this, for real. <3

That was amazing but as the other said I would love it even more if you described the other characters too. Stories need secondary characters too you know but even like that I liked it all. Love <3

The plot was amazing, the main characters were amazing as well but I would like it even more if you developed the other characters a little bit as well. :)

Keep on writing girl :)

Why don't you make a sequel? :D

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: You are an amazing writer! ;)
I loved this story. But, then again, everything I've read by you has been good.

Just finished Chapter 3! So far, so good!
But - and yes, there has to be a but somewhere in here - there were some minor errors. Just the smallest of things that I'm sure most people wouldn't notice.
Despite the few errors, you're an amazing writer! :)

I was disappointed I mean the story wasn't bad but I know you can write better than this. At the begining until she saw Blake kissing another girl I felt that the story want going any where and you hadn thought any of it through. I'm sad because you never really know the extent of the twos relationship. I felt it could be better I mean it was good just not for you and what you can write. Also all the people in there other than her and the brothers were random.... I mean she didn't need to make more friends.... I mean the story was fine not bad at all I mean I was just sad cause I KNOW you can and do write better

Okay, I can only come up for one reason about the story title and I'm not sure if it's right or not, but it's about Violet wondering if a kiss from a demon is going to make her forget about her feelings for/and about Blake.

The reason why I haven't described the other characters was so that my readers can focus on the main character and her brothers only.

Violet lives only for her not related brothers that raised her since she was four years old because those brothers made her feel loved and because of them she never missed her mother. Even though her mother left her at such a young age and with that sentence, she should still miss her because she's her mother. She gave birth to her and nothing can change that. If I was a child and that happened to me I would still miss her and maybe I would try hating her but deep inside my heart I would miss her. Violet didn't miss her mother though because of her not related brothers. Violet sees Kyle as her brother and as for Blake she couldn't help herself she fell in love with him.

If you have more questions I would love to give you the answers. :D

The story line was really good,
and if you ever decide to come back and edit to make it longer or more detailed let me know. (:
Because there are a lot of questions that weren't answered, and some parts were slightly confusing.
I enjoyed it a lot!

it was good, really cool story line like kinda like succubi :p

the polt of this story is perfect for an audience. but there isn't enough foundation/ detailed description. when you do use foundation it's great! but you kep using dialouge to hide the fact you're good at describing things. this will add to your chapters, fatening them up.

But you're doing great!

It's good. The chapters are really short but the plot itself is great. You might want to develop her friends' personalities- it's a bit overwhelming with all of the names and no description to match with them

I'm sorry for that but the banner wouldn't show up otherwise,
from a computer you won't have to scroll left and right to read.

The intro is amazing, buy the layout is impossible to read on my phone! It's crazy to keep scrolling left and right to read. Even on a computer, its a little hard to keep moving my eyes back and forth

I wish this story didn't end, but I love the way you brought it home.

I'm crying!!! :'(
Why the hell did that have to happen.
If you don't keep her alive, I'm gonna hate you.
Not really, but you get the meaning! HA.

If you make her die,
I'm gonna kick BLAKE'S ASS.
YEAH, you heard that right. [Reading] LOL

The banners are awesome! XD
I loved the pairings. He-he-he...

You have to post right now!!!!
Just to let you know.
>' '<

Here I am again!
Are you trying to make this story drama???
I don't want any more drama than my life babe,
so do something about that girl.
I want her alive! :DDD
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Good I need you to hold my hand right now >.< I can't believe that happen! How could you leave off like that?! :O I must know what happens next!

Ahhh!
I love this!
But... Why did Blake leave? :(
Bring his ass back! :)
I absolutely love this story!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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