I've actually got nothing bad to say. The layout is cute, I didn't notice any grammatical errors or any spelling errors, and the story idea is awesome. I love Rachel. She's so idgaf and just... Yep. She's cool.
And I like that the tow truck driver has a terrible voice. Wonderful story! :D
Aha this was just lovely. As I read on I thought, 'Oh so shes probably gonna end up having some kind of relationship with the tow truck driver and then they're gonna fall in love, blah blah blah.' But, nope, it turns out he has a terrible voice and listens to country music. I definitely LOVE where this is going. And I really really love the main character. She's awesome (:
Chapter one was fan-facking-tastic. I'm so happy that you're writing this story! I really like the main character - the teacher, or ex-teacher. Haha. We don't know her name yet, right?
Anyways, she's brilliant. I couldn't stop laughing when she snapped at her class like that. I liked the way you wrote her thoughts concerning the kids in the class - that seemed very realistic to me. Also, I LOVED all the Breakfast Club references! It's one of my favourite movies! Bender forever <3
Ooooohhh cute tow truck guy. I am intrigued by you. I must know more about you. Brown hair, side bangs.... Sigh. He sounds dreamy. Hahaha.
I definitely think this girl has taken it to the extreme of the extremes. Perhaps, the point could have come across it a less... violent way. People throw around I love you too often, but maybe it's the way they say it also.
This was quirky and I really liked it. I'm glad it wasn't like 'omg, he's so amazing that I just can't let him go' but more like 'yeah, I like him so I'm going to tie him up in my basement.' It was definitely a refreshing read and I liked it a lot!
I love the whole bluntness of it. It's quite refreshing compared to all the jazz people use. Not that I don't like the jazz, but it's whats expected. I didn't expect this, thus, I like it. I seriously thought she had this grand slideshow put together and I was like ooooookayyyy but she didn't. So it's less creepy. It's true though, people throw around 'I love you' like it's nothing.
Fucking...brilliant. I just love this. Perfect start, I am so glad I saw your journal tonight and remembered to come and read this like I said I would. I LOVE this girl. I can't wait to see where the shit this goes because you KNOWWWWW I love your writing. See, I'm still subscribed to Home. I NEVER WANNA LEAVE IT.
HOW SEXY OF A THING TO WRITE! I truly do love this - but she does seem rather insane. Logical or not. :'D I know I definitely wouldn't want to be with her, trololol. But then again I like boy parts. BUT IF I LIKED GIRL PARTS OR IF I OWNED BOY PARTS THAT LIKED GIRL PARTS. But you know what I'm saying, home dawg. This was a fantastic start and I think that this is definitely going on my subscription list (You'll be lucky número ten! And for some reason auto correct made 'number' convert to Español randomly. lulz.) and I will love it lots more in ze future! UPDATE SOON, PLEASE. I WANT TO LOVE IT. IT'S TOO SOON AND I DON'T WANT TO BE TIED UP! :'D
I LOVE THIS STORY SO HARD. I've never come across something like this before. It's awesome and kick-ass and other wonderful things. I totally understand the protagonist's logic. I'm sick of guys telling me they "love" me after a few weeks just to get in my pants. Sheesh. Awesome job! I'm subscribing! (:
Haha, this is so different. Like, who ties up their boyfriend because he said "I love you"?! Girls normally would die for that! But I totally get what she means, with people throwing the phrase around like it's freaking nothing. >:|
“You’re fucking nuts.” “At least I’m not fucking yours.”
Can't wait to see what all you have in store!
Definitely... subscribed! :D