Don't Let Me Go - Comments

Okay, before I say anything.
“Okay, honey, now remember, be safe and wrap his willy before you get silly!”
OH MY GOD. SCREAMING.

But anyway, I still love your writing, and I've missed it. This is a really great start.
The first part was really heartbreaking, but I love the relationship she has with Averi, it's cute.
I think this is going to be great. c:
UPDATE SOON. AND ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES.

Hmmm,,, what to say about this story? What to say? I LOEV this. ESPECIALLY Averi ;D Haha jk, but I yeah, I do love it :)

I've missed reading stuff from you. Aha! :)
I love how this went from like, serious at the beginning then into joking around the end in a smooth way.
And especially - “Okay, honey, now remember, be safe and wrap his willy before you get silly!”.
That just cracks me up for several reasons. Trolol.