Okay, before I say anything. “Okay, honey, now remember, be safe and wrap his willy before you get silly!” OH MY GOD. SCREAMING.
But anyway, I still love your writing, and I've missed it. This is a really great start. The first part was really heartbreaking, but I love the relationship she has with Averi, it's cute. I think this is going to be great. c: UPDATE SOON. AND ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES.
I've missed reading stuff from you. Aha! :) I love how this went from like, serious at the beginning then into joking around the end in a smooth way. And especially - “Okay, honey, now remember, be safe and wrap his willy before you get silly!”. That just cracks me up for several reasons. Trolol.
“Okay, honey, now remember, be safe and wrap his willy before you get silly!”
OH MY GOD. SCREAMING.
But anyway, I still love your writing, and I've missed it. This is a really great start.
The first part was really heartbreaking, but I love the relationship she has with Averi, it's cute.
I think this is going to be great. c:
UPDATE SOON. AND ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES.