It Always Ends With a Kiss - Comments

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i only wrote about peter and before wendy because I just finished reading Hook and after wendy and after peter is grown up have already been done

^I wholeheartedly agree.
I like that you did it before Wendy which gives a better understanding of Peter Pan himself. Plus, I just love Peter Pan. I wish I was apart of Peter Pan and the lost boys lmao. I like Mercy a lot, she's very adventurous, just like Wendy, only not haha.

Great job! :)

I enjoy Peter Pan stories because there is so much you can do with it. I like that you decided to write before about a time before Wendy. It makes it a little more unique, I think. Most stories are after Jane and ect.

The story was well written and enjoyable.
Great job. :)