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  • OhEmily_18

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    August 11th, 2014 at 11:49pm
  • TilDeathDoUsParty

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    I'm sorry but I have to say I agree with TayFreak. Sort out the spelling issues and it'd be much easier to read! However I did subscribe to this in the past (I often reread stories I've bookmarked) so it has a good storyline, but now, the errors are too much. Sorry.
    Also, if someone's giving constructive criticism, don't just retaliate angrily. They're trying to give you some pointers on how to improve in the future.
    August 11th, 2014 at 10:37pm
  • OhEmily_18

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    August 11th, 2014 at 04:06pm
  • TayFreak

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    I read two chapters and I'm sorry but the spelling is atrocious, I cant keep reading
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:52pm
  • SynysterKitty113

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    Yay!!! Sequel. I cant wait.
    August 6th, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • bailey08

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    can't wait for the sequel!!
    August 6th, 2014 at 10:05pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please write a sequel! I really want Danny and Jason back together!
    August 6th, 2014 at 08:30pm
  • OhEmily_18

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    @ bailey08
    Me to!
    July 28th, 2014 at 04:17pm
  • bailey08

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    i love her and jason together!
    July 28th, 2014 at 03:47pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Oh my god o.O update soon!
    July 28th, 2014 at 12:12pm
  • SynysterKitty113

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    thanks for the quick update!!! I still have hope for Jason...
    July 27th, 2014 at 04:27pm
  • xoMattiexo

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    AHHH I love this
    July 27th, 2014 at 10:40am
  • Metalwhore

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    Awww how cute! Update soon!!
    July 27th, 2014 at 10:25am
  • bailey08

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    missed this!!!!!!!! please update soon!
    July 24th, 2014 at 09:53pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Missed this Story!
    July 24th, 2014 at 05:50pm
  • jacklynnirene

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    Whew. Just did a re-read of this and boy do I still love it as much as I did the first time!
    June 21st, 2014 at 04:28am
  • bailey08

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    please update soon!!!
    April 2nd, 2014 at 02:32am
  • Metalwhore

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    Omfg, I love this story so much.
    Update very soon please!!!
    March 22nd, 2014 at 10:03am
  • bailey08

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    please update soon!!!
    March 15th, 2014 at 11:34pm
  • dallahaundra

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    I don't care how heart broken you are you don't go psycho on your significant other
    March 5th, 2014 at 03:33am
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