Zack just... left! Wha... I'm feel so bad for Jack and I just kinda wanna kick Zack's ass right now (not beat him to a pulp but actually give his ass a nice kick lol)
ooooooo i like it already and its barely begun love that it gets straight to the point and doesnt spend 15-20 chapters before zack finds out looking foward to reading more
awesome beginning. I believe this story will be amazing. I feel like imma be quite sad at times in this story but that's what I like about this. your writing is just that amazing I can already tell I'm prolly gonna show some epic emotions towards characters (good and bad) can't wait for next week together here :D
DUDE i can tell this story is going to be AMAZING!! your such a great writer and i know thisone will be as great as all of your others :) stay amazing!!
I'm definitely excited, you don't even know. I already love it and it's only an intro! Well I can't wait for a new chaaaappppttteeeerrrrr. Thanks for being awesome :)