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  • Myl

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    Still hoping you would continue this story... and i guess I am not the only one

    2016 who knows :)
    February 7th, 2016 at 11:39pm
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    Still hoping you would continue this story... and i guess I am not the only one

    2016 who knows :)
    February 7th, 2016 at 11:38pm
  • Linzee_Gee

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    I really hope you update this soon! I love this story
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:28am
  • Hopelessly Insane

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    I love this story i can't wait for the next chapter
    July 3rd, 2013 at 06:15am
  • Hopelessly Insane

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    I love this story i can't wait for the next chapter
    July 3rd, 2013 at 06:15am
  • ImNotThatGirl

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    This story! I love it
    April 26th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • Star Angel

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    Aw I think she should tell him love this please update soon
    November 20th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • hachie

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    Yup Brian was pissed when Lindsey didn't tell him what Gracie has told her that Tommy sexually abused her.
    Brian is trying to reassure her that he'll always be one side no matter what she does.
    That probably relieved Gracie a little bit, hearing her dad say that everything about her matters everything to him.
    She is really sending out signals that she is afraid.
    Like how she sleeps with a nightlight and that she didn't want to left alone that night.
    Gracie should tell her dad in her own words that she was sexually assaulted because then her dad can make sure that Tommy goes away for life and then her dad can get sole custody of her.
    Since she doesn't want to go back to her mother.
    I can't wait for more!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 19th, 2011 at 07:51am
  • hachie

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    Ethan definitely knows something is wrong with Gracie.
    He noticed how quiet she has become and she always tip toeing around afraid that she might get hurt.
    He's getting fed with her mood swings that change rapidly.
    Her mother will just tell Brian that nothing is wrong with Gracie since she didn't her when she tried to tell her that Tommy raped her.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 13th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • hachie

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    So you are doing NaNaWriMo too?
    Alot of my favorite authors are doing that!
    I wish you luck your story and I can't wait for read it!
    So Brian knows that Gracie has been sexually assaulted but he needs proof that she was.
    He needs Gracie to tell him herself and he is getting close to finding out the truth.
    He needs to reassure her that he will be with her.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 30th, 2011 at 01:54am
  • Sue Saloio

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    I love this story <3
    I do have some ideas about what happened to Gracie, but maybe I'm wrong... :$
    I bet Brian would believe her, and Michelle too!
    Update soon
    October 25th, 2011 at 12:17pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Loved the new chapterrr. Can't wait for the next chapterrr
    October 22nd, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon
    October 22nd, 2011 at 12:01am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    oh please update soon, this cliff hanger is too big to leave like that for long. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 21st, 2011 at 04:28am
  • hachie

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    She doesn't want to tell her dad the truth because she's afraid that she's going to lose him and he won't believe her like her mother did.
    Gracie really needs to tell someone what happened to her even if it's not her father because the nightmares are going to get worse with each passing day that she keeps that secret to herself.
    Though Brian knows that someone hurt his little girl because she isn't the same when she came back from her mothers.
    Hopefully Gracie will start to open more.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 21st, 2011 at 12:45am
  • Star Angel

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    Omg I love this please updated soon
    October 20th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • hachie

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    So even Mckenna has noticed something is off with Gracie though she going to need to spend some more time with Gracie to figure it out.
    But at least Brian knows that Gracie will talk to him sometime in the future because he is her dad.
    Awwww Papa Gates!
    Who could hate that man????
    He is the most funniest guy ever! X3
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 19th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • x-LozziePop-x

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    Aww I love Brian..so cute :)
    I hope he finds out about the reason behind the nightmares soon..so sad :( x
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • hachie

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    I don't mind the change!
    But wow Brian just witness his daughter screaming and crying from the nightmare she was having.
    Now Brian is determine to why and what is causing those nightmares and why Grace is so afraid.
    And Grace is worried that her dad will react the same as her mother did and that's why she didn't say anything else to her dad.
    Things are getting very interesting!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • hachie

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    I take it that something happened between her and her Uncle Tommy.
    Because like she said, he use to be her favorite now she doesn't even want to go back there anymore.
    I believe that he did something sexually to Grace since she has nightmares now and she's not that happy like before.
    And the fact that she told her mother and others but they don't believe her.
    This is getting very interesting!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 01:27am