Malevolence - Comments

I totally remember this story! I loved it.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I wish that maybe the reader could have had more insight to each character and what their "demon" was before they died, but the general idea and plot line was great! I loved how dark it was. And I have to ask. Is that the Bates house from Psycho? Just wondering. I liked it! Good job!

This was amazingly awesome! I loved how dark and creative it was!
Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read in here.
Awesome job :D

This is an amazingly creepy story..
and I LOVED it.
I've never read anything like that on here... or anywhere, for that matter!
5 stars, for sure!! :)

Btw......the word "Malevolent" is my all time favorite word.
In fact my name on my Facebook is Mandi Malevolent. =D

Well Dear Lord.
lol I am just flabbergasted lmao. (I never use that word either)
I have to say that I thoroughly LOVED this story.Omg.
I'm glad you entered it in my contest.
I've honestly never read anything like this.
Great job!! =D

Well I read the whole thing and I have to say it was awesome. I couldn't stop reading it. In my opinion the story was too short and I wish there was more but oh well. You are a great writer :)

I love this so far! It is creepy and mysterious and very interesting. You actually made me laugh which is really good and the story has caught my interest. Please keep going!

I love this so far! It is creepy and mysterious and very interesting. You actually made me laugh which is really good and the story has caught my interest. Please keep going!

I'm liking this so far. It's creepy, but that's a good thing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

I think I'm really going to like this story. :) I remember reading these kinds of stories when I was younger, and they always creeped me out. Stories with darker themes will always have a special place in my heart. :P

Anywho, interesting start, I'm looking forward to seeing how this unfolds! Also, I love that you've included Jimmy in the story. <3