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I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Maybe they james and allison should pretend to date to make kris jealous and realize what he is missing

Kris is such an asshole!

Ugh, screw Kris.

"Things had been weird ever since he’d gotten here - Flower wouldn’t look him in the eye, Jordan seemed short with him, TK and Engell didn’t say much. Neal was sitting right next to him and hadn’t even said ‘hi’ when he’d gotten there."

That's right they all know what you are doing even if Allison didn't see it at that point. Sorry I really liked that whole part because even though he is their teammate they know that he is doing something terrible and they are mad. And of course a bit of James Neal *swoon* (He makes me so mad though, ugh).

Anyway.... amazing update I really liked this one. I guess I assumed she knew and was just trying to fix it. I didn't actually realize that she didn't know (or was denying it). But that was a terrible way to find out. Not as bad as seeing it happening, but terrible nonetheless.

Well hopefully more soon but no rush! I know you have a lot of other stories going on right now too!

Amanda

P.S.
dallasstar28 thinks James Neal should get with Allison also! :) Although if she gets back with Kris, which is probably inevitable maybe he shouldn't...they can be friends though or something.

Off her feet sorry

I think the real deal james neal shouls sweep Allison on her feet!

I'm really glad you've been updating so frequently lately.

No can Marc, Neal, Jordan,or TK beat the crap out of him? Maybe even have Crosby swoop in and save the girl?! (;

Ugh Kris is such an idiot...he needs to realize he already has a good life and shouldn't throw it away for some whore. Can't wait to see what happens!

Awe I feel so bad for Allison. I hope she finds a guy that really deserves her ( maybe on the team) and shows Kris exactly what he threw away. Can't wait for more!! Keep up the spectacular work!!!

Kris is an asshole. I hope that this is just so freak mistake and Kris is not really cheating, but I doubt it. She deserves so much better and I am happy that the guys aren't supporting him with his foolish ways. I hope to know more soon because I am sort of hooked! :)

Aw Allison......she deserves so much better! Amazing update, can't wait for more :)

Omg I love this story! It just breaks my heart to see kris be such an ass though, I just want them to have a huge fight then get back together :) but the chapter was really good!

Please update again right away. What is he going to do to fix this? Will he even try?

Well I'm glad she finally found out how much of a douche he really is!
Now, she should find James and have her way with him...because that's what I would do! ;)
Anyways, hopefully she gives Kris hell! Can't wait for more! <3

As if I didn't think Kris was a douche before, his comment about Heather's looks forced the fucking issue. He's scum. That's it. Why Allison ever got with him in the first place, I don't understand? He must hide his douchebaggery awful well. Ugh, this story frustrates me to no end! Please update soon?!

I love this!!

I love this story!!! My heart broke reading the last chapter.

She needs to dump his ass ASAP.