also i find this story quite ironic coz i know someone called charlotte gray.... yeah i know different spelling of grey but anyways..... and she is the loudest person you'd ever meet lol :P
omg im luving this story thanks guys for writing it!!! the only mistake ive come across so far is in chapter 2, paragraph 5, it says "I am surprised to fin...... shouldnt it be find? yeah anyways i'll comment again if i find anything else!!