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EEHH love love love. Can't wait to see the sequel. *hint* Alanna needs some chicken nuggets lol*hint*

I can't believe Zacky tried to pull something like that.
But I am glad that Caleb knocked him out before he hurt Callie.
I am glad that Andy took them away from him and started a new life for them.
He gave them so much so they could start over and become new people.
But the most adorable part was when Andy and Callie kissed during the Hockey game!
SO CUTE!
I love this story and I am glad that you back!

i <3ed the old story, but the re-write was a lil' bit better.
im sooooooo happy the sequel is back up n running!!!!!!!! :)

One thing that really irked me in this story is that... a sentence is NOT a paragraph. At least three sentences is a paragraph. The structure of a narrative/novella is important because it helps set the flow.

She lost her baby :(
I wonder how Matt going to make Zacky pay for hurting Callie and for losing his child too.
Great update

YOU BROUGHT BLACK VEIL BRIDES INTO THE STORY I DON'T THINK I COULD LOVE YOU ANY MORE RIGHT NOW. <3 <3 <3 <3

HERE ENTER ANDY FUCKING SIXX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is really Andy, getting hurt from performing on stage!
Damn so that baby was Matt and now Matt is devastated that he lost his first child because Zacky couldn't keep his dick in his pants.
Okay I just remembered that Zacky lied, it wasn't the first time with that whore, it the second time.
Angry Matt is going to put Zacky in a lot of pain for what he did to Callie.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was wondering when Andy would come back into the picture...and Zacky deserved that

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO U KILLED HER BABY.........................AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she finally met or is gonna meet ANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep updating

Zacky definitely deserved more than what he got. I feel bad for Matt and Callie, losing the son they didn't know they were gonna have. :( And now she's met Andy. So she'll probably leave with him. Great update!

Aw. I love the way she meets Andy. :D And poor Matt. :( And fuck Zacky, that asshat.

Awww so sad. I'm glad Matt beat Zacky up... Hey Andy made his debut!

dun dun dun! cant wait for next chapter! MATT ALL THE WAY!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 DON'T LET HER DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What is there to explain Zacky!!! The proof is right there around your penis..lipstick marks that arent callie's.
I hope she okay. She doesn't deserve this kind of pain.
Amazing update :D

Wow hoyl crap! Your a god at writing! ><

Holy crap...i can't believe this chapter. Can't wait for more :D

:( It still breaks my heart. :( At least she found out in a less heartless way. Unlike the first time. I mean, it's still fucked up, but the original way was waaaayyy beyond fucked up.

You finally done it Zacky...you lost the girl that loved you

Poor Callie. She found out, and it's sad. I cried a little. I can't believe Zacky tried to say it was a one time thing, the asshole. I hate him even more in this story. And Matt's furious having trusted Zack too. I definitely agree with him though. That should've been Zack.