well I was sick last night as I wrote it, so I tried to make it interesting. good. I actually do, It's gonna be a crazy story with most likely a sequel.
October 21st, 2011 at 12:52am
constructive criticism.... im told im good at it..... the last chapter seemed a little boring, sort of a filler? yeah. anyways im still enjoying it tho. do you know where this storyline is actually going to go? you could do some really good things with these characters.. :)
i'll leave you to it <3
xxMorgan