You seriously deserve every comment you get:) your stOry is amazing and I get very excited when I get the email from mibba saying you updated:) keep up the amazing wOrk!!
well that was rude, he was mean about it when she first told him, going so far as to ask if it was his, yeah i get it, it was a moment of panic, but still, he can't be furious with her, he should be mad at himself, for not fighting harder for her
D: well that went pretty good I'm mean zacky could've gone all ape mode and thrown something but all he did was yell and stuff...Thor is so freaking cute!!!!:) great update can't wait for more!!!!:)
Haha of course shit hits the fan. Can you PLEASE do a chapter in Zacky's POV? I think it would be completely and totally amazing just to get a glimpse of that insanity and his reaction to the kid. I'm picturing him sitting in his car, staring at the picture for hours until someone - most likely Brian -- comes to knock on the door and then it's like WHOA! Of course, I have no idea what your writing plan is, but I'm excited to see what happens. It'd be adorable for Thor to realize Zacky is his dad though.
"Thor, this is Mommy's...friend...from a long time ago..."
"He looks like me."
"...Actually little buddy, you look a lot like me."
"Oh, you must be my dad."
(both of them) "Um...yeah..."
"Cool. Want to play Batman with me?"
I just feel like Thor's the coolest, mellowest kid ever. And obviously his favourite uncles are going to be Jimmy and Brian, duh. I'm imaging a moment where Thor says he wants to be like Uncle Syn, and it's just going to be a funny stab at Zacky. But I'm getting ahead of myself...WHAT DOES THE TEXT MESSAGE SAY? The cliff hangers are all well and good, but honestly the tiny chapters with huge cut offs are killing me here woman. WE NEED MORE lol