Chlorine - Comments

I just started reading this story and I love it. It's so sad that everything is complicated with Alice she needs some happiness in her life and her sister needs to back off. I want her to be with Gustav and another part of me wants her to be with Ryder. I can't believe how Gustav can be so clueless about how Alice feels about him and Anita going after him KNOWING that Alice likes him is so messed up. I can't wait to read more.

So happy this story is back! Great update.

Ahhh, I'm so glad this is back in action again! The drama is thickening and I still don't know who I ship Alice with, both Gustav and Ryder have their pros and cons :'D

@ Codikins5
Thank you!!! Finally someone is on team Gustav-Alice haha. Thanks for reading!

I can't wait to read more. I totally ship team Alice and Gustav but Ryder needs someone like Alice.

@ Loveless!
Wow thanks! I'm really happy you like it. Ahhh why do people love Ryder more? Where's the love for Gustav? I love him hahaha

Oh my God Yes! I love this story I'm usually the silent reader but I couldn't hold it anymore I love Alice and like Ryder besides his annoying self I like motorcycles (lol). and as for Anita she needs a backhand slap

@ Love The Sea
Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it! I'll be updating it three days from now. How do you like it so far?

This story is awesome so far!! Love it to bits! Keep posting :)

@ hawker!

Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you like it and I'm happy that finally someone commented on my story yay! First commenter deserves a hug! Yay! Hahaha. Me personally likes Gustav because I like him, Ryder is kinda grumpy haha but let's see where this will go. Thank you again, I update this every three days :)

This is really cute and charming! I'm glad Ryder is easing up on Alice, and their chemistry is hilarious, and I even kinda ship them a bit. I'm also eager to see what happens with Gustav and Alice, not to mention Anita. This is a great story and I can't wait to read more!