Mirrors - Comments

Stolid - You’re using rather awesome vocabulary thus far, rather intriguing. Not to say that stolid is a massively fantastic word, I just would rather assume that the majority of people figured you meant “solid”. lol

Belle’s anti-social-ness is well played, and it is carried throughout the piece. I wonder if Lee will be upset that Billie willed Belle out of her seat and into a breakfast arrangement, but she herself could not. I would assume it won’t go unnoticed.

I really like the college air. A lot of people tend to stick to high school (possibly because that’s all they know) but this is very nice. I am assuming it’s college, I might be wrong…

But all the same, the dynamic between her and her friend is nice, Billie seems interesting enough for a start, an eye catcher, but not over the top what so ever. I like the hint of clothing detail but not extravagant, and I really appreciate the lack of personal descriptions for Belle; something I find obnoxious at most times!

Comment Swap of course brought me here, and that concludes Chapter one! I most progress through the rest!

I hate to be a Debbie Downer but I don't like Billie's DID. I think the premise is great, but his 'personalities' are not well developed. Belle's character is beautifully crafted with the exception of her reaction to 'Twitch' and 'Fink'. I mean this as constuctive and not rudely. Sorry.

Comment swap brought me here~ But I just wanted to say I really love this story . (: The plotline is great , and it keeps your interest through the story . Also , I can see Billie with MPD , and I love Green Day as well . I hope you update it again soon . C:

Hello, so comment swap brought me here. I'm not too big of a Green Day fan but your story summary made your story seem very interesting and made me what to continue reading, you use very good spelling and grammar which I love,you also use detail. Which is also very good. Update your story soon!! Good job. Keep up the nice work.

This is wonderful! I really like the style you write in and I think the idea of Billie's different personalities is so unique, well done! I don't usually read any band fanfiction other than Avenged Sevenfold but I really like how this one is coming along. Billie Joe Armstrong is really beautiful aswell :)

kasjdfhasd so I really like this story, and I'm only on the first chapter. I love Green Day with all my heart, and this story is lovely. I'll be sure to subscribe. I'd give more feedback, but I'm so tired I can't see the screen. I'll give a better comment tomorrow or something, I promise

Okay, so i'm already in love with this story, only because I'm a GIANT Green Day fan. I love all three of the men.
I am now in love with the name Arabella. It's so unique, just like the rest of her character.
Keep going, this has real potential.

Wow! I love Arabella's character. I also really think she and Billie are cute together. :) And I love all Billie's different personalities.