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  • becauseiamfree

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    i love jordan
    i hope it all works out well!!
    cant wait for more <3
    June 15th, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • ginnygene

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    MORE!!!!
    June 15th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • loveisaluxury--

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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ... IT IS NEEDED
    June 14th, 2012 at 05:50pm
  • ibleedforyou;

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    I've been reading your story ever since chapter one. You can definitely see the improvements in your writing ability. I love seeing a writer grow! As for Jordan, I feel so bad for him; But we all knew Valarie and John were meant to be from the start.
    June 14th, 2012 at 06:51am
  • MaineLovex33

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    OHMYGOD YOU SHSLSJSLOOAAOA JORDAN COME HERE!!!!!! :(
    June 14th, 2012 at 05:54am
  • megga16

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    oh my god! ahhhhhhhhhh!
    June 14th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • theMainelover997

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    WOOOWW!! :)
    June 14th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    Snap Snap Snap!!!!
    June 14th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • alyssabeach

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    soooooooo gooood
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:56am
  • dreamerxx

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    Soon everyone! I have most of it, the idea is just not flowing at the moment. But soon <3
    June 10th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • theMainelover997

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    i need a new update!! :D
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • hersheykiss

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    this is driving me crazy I need to know what happens! update? c:
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • megga16

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    update please!!
    May 31st, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    Noooo he was so close :(
    Can't wait for more <3
    May 27th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • kuzanx

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    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy OMG the story is so good and well written, you really have the potential of becoming a great writer. And the way you set up the chemistry of love/friendship between them are just too amazing and complex. Hope you the best Mr. Green and hope you will find a relationship :) just like the story. Cool TEAM JORDAN^
    May 26th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • becauseiamfree

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    i love this story so much!
    i hope something happens and she comes home before those 2 months...
    not something bad just something...

    cant wait for more <3
    May 25th, 2012 at 01:17pm
  • xxJilliann

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    update soon!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 03:57am
  • musiclovex3

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    this story is awesome
    May 21st, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • alyssabeach

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    so goooooooood
    May 21st, 2012 at 05:09am
  • jabenton22

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    Ugh, update soon please! I must know what John's idea is!
    May 21st, 2012 at 04:43am
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