Well this is different. I thought it would be like a love story, with humans. xD That's not the case. I still like it though. I'm not into supernatural kind of things but it's good. I like your way of writing. I also like that you didn't make it sound cliche or same old same old. I have a story too called I Never Told You What I Do For A Living. It's a more romantic kind of thing. I'm getting to the big twist now. I also enjoy the fact that you didn't put a creepy layout. I hate when I see dumb layouts on stories. I like this because it makes us focus more on the story rather than the layout.
Something I need to learn. lol. I like making layouts but their not scary so don't worry. I don't know why you don't have more comments on this. You're a good writer. You need a little more spice but we can work on that. Over all, good job. ;)
This is just a promise comment. I promise you I'm gonna read this. But I'm working on an essay that's do by midnight. O.O I love the song, I love the band, so I will probably love this. There will also be another long comment. ;)
why are there no comments? some ppl just dnt appreciate a good story but i do and this si good i like where you're going witht htis and i like how you clearly defined the rules which means that things will probably get interresting for ghost Mikey hope u update :)