It's Hard to Make It Look Easy - Comments

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Ahah! I gotta say, my favorite part is when Zak sees her in her underwear! And then tells her it's a good color on her! xD

Haha I know I said last time I couldn't seem to have an opinion on Zak or Billy? Well, after this chapter, I say Zak. :3

Can't get past your punctuation and the initial slow pace. Sorry!

Ugh.... I can't believe how bad I am at keeping up with stories! Anyway, I'm caught up now! Hmm..... Bri pregnant or not.... Zak or Billy? I can't even formulate my own opinion! This is the first time this has ever happened.... o.o

Bella is so cute... I wonder who the mystery groom is.... Hmmmm

Billy needs to back off in my opinion... Go Zak! I know I would def go straight for him... Or at least halfway straight... Anyway! Really glad I found this story! Could use some filling out detail wise so it doesn't feel slightly rushed, but it is really good!

Billy's still on my sh*t list. Go for Zak, Bri!

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next chapter i like it so far billy is jelous aaawww zak ismcute tryin to teach her how to swim