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  • VampOfZaksDreams

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    update?
    February 23rd, 2015 at 11:55pm
  • TheKelsie

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    Ahah! I gotta say, my favorite part is when Zak sees her in her underwear! And then tells her it's a good color on her! xD
    November 28th, 2012 at 10:32pm
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    Haha I know I said last time I couldn't seem to have an opinion on Zak or Billy? Well, after this chapter, I say Zak. :3
    November 6th, 2012 at 11:45pm
  • PourquoiBella

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    Can't get past your punctuation and the initial slow pace. Sorry!
    November 1st, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • TheKelsie

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    Ugh.... I can't believe how bad I am at keeping up with stories! Anyway, I'm caught up now! Hmm..... Bri pregnant or not.... Zak or Billy? I can't even formulate my own opinion! This is the first time this has ever happened.... o.o
    October 25th, 2012 at 10:15pm
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    Bella is so cute... I wonder who the mystery groom is.... Hmmmm
    June 26th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • TheKelsie

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    Billy needs to back off in my opinion... Go Zak! I know I would def go straight for him... Or at least halfway straight... Anyway! Really glad I found this story! Could use some filling out detail wise so it doesn't feel slightly rushed, but it is really good!
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:34pm
  • BrokenGraceEFINI

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    Billy's still on my sh*t list. Go for Zak, Bri!
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:51am
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    May 6th, 2012 at 06:14pm
  • Bublebiebs

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    next chapter i like it so far billy is jelous aaawww zak ismcute tryin to teach her how to swim
    February 27th, 2012 at 12:35am
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