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  • mapwithnocompass

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    I was listening to it never ends while reading this and when it said "Everything I loved became everything I lost" the song played it! So weird! Awesome story :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • CourageKeeper

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    Are you going to write more of this??
    Or is that the ending?
    I would really like to see if Amandas and Olis relationship takes off again or is it just too much o=for them (:
    Can't wait<3
    April 29th, 2012 at 04:24am
  • BonerDirection

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    TACO
    March 31st, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • megsyxo3

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    love love love this story!!! and thanks for the profile comment by the way :D
    February 6th, 2012 at 10:44pm
  • ghiibli

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    even though I had to break up the chapters through out my day to read them, it was totally worth it.
    beautifully written, Oliver's thoughts are so well executed, and I can't wait to read more.
    :-)
    though he is a cheating little whore in this story, I still adore him. hahah
    February 4th, 2012 at 01:54am
  • lex;

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    What on earth is Oli gonna do about Adelynne though?!
    January 26th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • eat.it.eat.it

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    omg.
    omfg.
    slkdjrfyknjhgjrthtert
    I really understand Oli's reaction to Amanda being back, with all the flood of emotion coming towards him all of a sudden and possibly the memories of being with her and the addiction and such. That same exact thing has happened to me more than once and it hurts like a bitch and there's really nothing you can do to get rid of the memories once they've come back. And seeing as Oli already understood that there was already something missing, I just think that he's using Adelynne just to get a hold on his life, maybe push himself in the direction of god and cover up the fact that he obviously misses Amanda.

    sorry. I had to go indepth on my thoughts.

    update soon, pwease? :3
    January 23rd, 2012 at 04:16am
  • EmptyInside

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    awesome that you updated. cant wait for the next part.
    January 21st, 2012 at 08:47am
  • lens eyes

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    Mmm, as always, I adored this.
    There is so much to say, I don't know where to begin.

    Amanda and Oliver belong together.
    But at the same time, I feel like he owes his current girlfriend something.

    I, personally, know the gnawing, aching need you feel when you love someone.
    It never goes away and even if you tell yourself it does, it never fades.
    It will always have the ability to knock the breath out of you.

    I love it.
    More soon, I hope. <3
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:44am
  • lex;

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    SUPERMAN WITH THE WIND AT HIS BACK c;
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:41am
  • Jorel Decker.

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    I'm so excited that this story is finally up (: and no, I didn't catch the Eminem quote! Grr.
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:05am
  • eat.it.eat.it

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    *Spazzes out on the floor*
    oh my jesus lord.
    I was anticipating this so much i subscribed even before the first chapter was up. J/s.
    January 21st, 2012 at 12:58am
  • EmptyInside

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    sooo...
    January 20th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • lex;

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    I'm still mad at oli, it's sort of his fault he is where he is, isn't it? He's the one who shunned amanda after she told him and then made her leave, and now he's miserable :(
    January 20th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • lens eyes

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    I'm about to come out of my skin, waiting for you to write this first chapter.
    So write it already c:

    Let me just tell you, that I read Skinned Junkie in like 2 days time,
    and really just became addicted to it. I was even reading it on
    my iPhone during dinner, lmfao

    I dunno, it was weird.
    Because I'm diabetic, and I give myself shots everyday, but I've never thought about it in a herion aspect, like what it would be like if I shot up heroin or something?
    Your story made me really think about that.
    Would the needle feel any different than my insulin needle?

    It was strange, because I had never thought about it before.

    And then when she had the abortion, it killed me. Because abortions in general make me mad, sad, upset, pitiful, just a whole string of emotions.
    I mean, in one way I get why women get them, but in another way, it's a life, and no one has the right to take a life. And it was a serious note in the story that resonated for me you know?
    While it was probably better for her to have an abortion because the kid was probably addicted to heroin as well, it was still her and Oliver's child, and he should have been part of the decision.

    Meh, I'm getting really into the finer details. I think a lot when I read stories that I love, that aren't just about really cutesy subjects.

    At any rate, this is a long enough comment.
    And post the first chapter soon.
    January 17th, 2012 at 07:52pm
  • EmptyInside

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    awesome. can't wait.
    January 9th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • lex;

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    God I can't wait for this story!
    January 8th, 2012 at 11:58pm
  • MotherMedusa.

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    I am so excited for this.~
    December 20th, 2011 at 03:00am
  • morte et dabo

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    can't waiiit!
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:46pm