Expectation Is Taking Its Toll - Comments

Awww I love the format of this story. I've never read anything like this in my life. At first I wa a bit confused since my mind takes a while to get used to the Sam/Raine thing. But I eventually for through the chapter without thinking in mild confusion. I think it's kinda cute how Sam and Raine are two different people who feel the same about each other. They express it in different ways and I totally respect that. Their actions are kind of hilarious at times. Sometimes I just sigh and think "wow, if they only knew"

It's very different and new and I think Grace's idea would be helpful, but I can see it you don't want to change it because it's cool either way.

Have you considered putting one of the perspectives in a different color, or maybe in italics?? This is a really cool idea, but that might help make it more clear.

That was so cute <3 Thank you for updating with two new chapters!! :D It's so funny listening/reading their thoughts, because they both have a bit of thing for each other but neither wants to say it aloud. But I'm glad Raine got the courage to fling a note at him :D

Cannot wait for a new update - I just loveth this!! <3 I just need to... tell my friends or something about it :) Or something. This deserves so much loove <3

I'm surprised there aren't any comments on this yet; I really like how this is set up. Though I do have to admit, at first I had to think "Okay, SAM IS 1ST AND RAINE IS 2ND! REMEMBER!" and at the beginning I couldn't remember who was who, but after getting around that I really really enjoy the style of it.

I hope you update this soon; I'll try to comment as often as I can :) Definitely going to subscribe <3

Oh! And by the way, I love it when their responces are either the same or opposite, just to prove how their lives can be so similar yet so different :) I don't know, I just really like this. <3