All Eight Guardians - Comments

I love the pixies! But poor Annabell... But thanks for updating!!! <3

You mad3 m3 happy! Thanks 7or updat3ing, litt3rally NO ON3 is. You l37t us at a cli77-hang3r, though! Updat3 soon???

Sorry about not commenting for forever, I, like, just got my laptop back, but I really liked that chapter! (And all the other ones I haven't commented on. Silent readers make me sad, too.)

Just found your story today and thought i would tell you it's one of the best I've found on this site. I love the relationships between the characters and the story line so far can't wait for another update.

I love it!!! Nicely done!

Okay, i have a question. How in the world do you, like, costomize the storys with the pictures and stuff?

Nice! I definatley (may be misspelled) liked it!

thanks for the shout out! so i'll try to give constructive critisism, but critisism isn't my forte. i'll try anyway, though. here goes: i really like the whole weapons-on-necklace-idea. that was cool. i liked the differenciation (may be misspelled) betwen the magic/magik. i was going to ask about that before you explained it, so i'm glad you did. all in all a very cool chapter. (sorry 'bout the length!)

I love it ! update soon?

I only got up to Chapter 2. To read later. Love it.

I only got up to Chapter 2. To read later. Love it.

.... So where'd Nick go?

Whoooo! Update! lol

More Yin/Yang thing there again huh? I'm guessing we're going to see a lot of this throughout your story. :) I really do like Yin & Yang. Two bad things coming together to make one good thing (or so I've heard thats what it means). This could possibly mean theres two sides to the world. Or earth is one and what the characters are on is the other (I couldn't find the name of the world. Or is it Omega?). Either way, awesome. :)

I had a dream ages ago that was sort of like this. Except it was more of finding a group of heroes that would help defend a town. I found an elf (as in Link style - tall/human like with pointy ears and blonde), a horse whisperer, and a dwarf called Diddum. I could also turn into an Ogre.

... It was weird, and this comment is sort of pointless, BUUUUUUUT its a comment that will get the next chapter out quicker. ;) LOVEN IT!

I think Moose and Roman both have a thing for Karri XD not even kidding!!!
and you should give a physical discription in your characters page of all of them, the pictures are nice but its kind of hard to tell, and what color wolf is Nick? maybe I just missed it....white maybe? haha But I also think that the picture that you gave for Karri....it doesnt fit her to me. She doesnt come of as being blonde, this whole time i read the chapters before I just noticed the character page I had been imagining her with dark hair and killer dark blue or violet eyes & a tiny little thing. The blonde, tall girl with the blocky body just doesnt go with her "leaderness" of the group or her subtle bad assness.
sorry if I over stepped there, its been bugging me
otherwise, I love this story :) just found it today, but the title could use a little work....its one of those predictable/too long title that turns a lot of people away thinking it will be just that, predicable (In fact i almost passed the story right up, based entirely on the tittle) also there are a few grammatical errors and spelling errors. Maybe get a beta?
I love this whole idea though! I am a total sucker for stories like this, always have been & the idea that Nick could be stuck as a wolf for a long time? genius
and the character grouping, with the 2 loner best friends, the badass chick whos obsessed with hot men & seems to be quite selfish, and then the 2 badass guys (the quiet one and the loud one with the temper) loooove it! I can see great conflict coming from within the group
altho I think there might be more to John then meets the eye.
Sorry for the long comment...Im kind of known for them when i choose to comment
cant wait for more!
also dont be offended by the first half of my comment, i tend to be opinionated and I also like to point out everything I see that could be improved, I dont do it to be abitch, but to try and help you
lots of love,
Erin Grace
p.s. I hope you are a frequent updater!!!

Sooooo will there be some weapons with specific powers or that are connected to the guardians or something....? :3

I like it! I also like it how you had a guy with the black hair and a guy with white hair. Got some sort of yin and yang thing going on, you know? :)