Kiyo Nakamoto - Comments

@ deck of cards
Thanks a lot for your reply. I'm still working in it but recently I took a break after writing my second season which lead up to chapter 63. I'm a bit disappointed in what I have so far for my 3rd season and I restarted it about 5 times already. I do plan to finish it once I finish Volume 4 and 5 of my Hanru Sazuki Story and I actually might be revising my first 26 chapters of this story. I lose track of characters and plot and I have a lot of plot holes and the story can be a bit messy at times. So I want to fix it and make the third season a bit darker and more original. I wish I could continue it now but my mental state literally needs to go through a metamorphosis depending on my story. But I'll get to it eventually.

@ Rebell
Oh wow thank you a lot. That means a lot. It's an anime story I wrote! :)

I like this. It's interesting and not usually the kind of thing I'd read but I did actually really enjoy it. Great job!

I read the first chapter or two a long while back and coulda swore I commented on it but I guess not. It's great to see some original fiction anime around here, I think I've only seen two others. I have three of my own and I get more in to stories that weren't someone elses to begin with. So yours is very refreshing. I can relate to you well because I can see how much effort you put into this. Over a hundred thousand words and you have been writing for a couple years shows that a lot of commitment and thought has gone into this. I'm the same way, one of my stories called Dantega is almost a half million words and I'm only now getting towards the finish. So I know what it takes to see things through to the end! I really hope you finish this story, and I'll do my best to catch up as well!