Deal with the Devil - Comments

Love!
Seriously. I'm wicked jealous :o
You, ma'am, have raw talent.

One thing:
It shortly after his demand that I was picked up off the ground by two men.

I believe that there should be a "was" between the words "it" and "shortly."
Other than that, I didn't see anything wrong.

Shit. I have a feeling Tyler won't get the money. I mean he ran away without her before just to save his own ass.
Gah loved it. :)

I love this....Tyler better act fasr if he wants her alive

Oh boy this is bad!!!
I hope they would not kill her . . .
Tyler better act fast.
<3 Michele

love this!

wow i like this. i am definetly subscribing [:

you're a very good writer :)
I hope you update frequently!

I loved the chapter!!!
I can't believe though that one of them punched her!!
Not good.
<3 Michele

I love how different this story is from your others. :) It's a nice change, and I can't wait to see what you do with it.

I'm loving it so far :D

This seems interesting. I think I just might subscribe.

I love this so far

Love love love...

I really like it so great start. I love the banner. I feel bad for her that she got kidnapped because.her fiance owed them money she didn't know. But damn I can't believe he punched her he could at least slapped her. I can't wait to read more please update soon!

That is a great beginning!
So much action and I want to know
what happens to Valen. I love the name
you chose for the main character.

Wow, love this already! I can't wait to see where you go with this! :)

Wow I am already very interested in this story!
I can't wait for the first chapter to be up! X3
I am so excited!

Yes, I will be reading this story.
Why yes, the banner and layout is in fact gorgeous.
YES, I will be awaiting your first chapter. <33