April 4th, 2012 at 01:47am
It's a Matter of Looking - Comments
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this is soooooooooooooo good! I just read the whole thing straight through without stopping and now I want to read more, so update soon!!!!April 1st, 2012 at 06:58pm
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Holy shit!! That was amazing. Like I think it's some of the best writing you've done to date.
I was interested the whole time and totally got lost in that chapter.
Hahaha there were parts that were hilarious. Like during the basketball game when Jimmy blocked everyone from seeing Johnny haha. Aww poor Johnny.
Great update hun! You just get better and better every time.April 1st, 2012 at 04:26am -
Yay!! That was a great update.
You're a great writer too Corr. =)March 12th, 2012 at 01:37am -
Aww it's cute but shocking how Matt and Brian are official. :3 I really can't wait on what happens next.(:March 2nd, 2012 at 05:27am
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Wow amazing, i loved the outline (: i never read any ofyour stories before. You got stills!! look forward to reading more keep it up.March 2nd, 2012 at 03:13am
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Yay! That was a good update.
I'm proud of you lol.
I totally wasn't expecting that about Matt and Brian though.March 2nd, 2012 at 02:41am -
Great update.February 13th, 2012 at 11:57pm
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Ahhh! I lovet his story!February 10th, 2012 at 03:42am
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Aw awesome update hun!!
You have a right to be proud. =DFebruary 6th, 2012 at 02:18am -
Zacky is such a jerk. -_- Well, I really like this update, I love how Lauren & Kiara are helping Rachel,(:February 6th, 2012 at 12:35am
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I loved the update. Finally Rachael is getting the help she needs because she really needed help especially after all the stuff that has happened to her. Uhhh Zacky is so selfish it pisses me off but he is still really hot. Kiara and Lauren are really sweet and I am glad that they are willing to help her. I have a feeling that this is going to get really interesting so I am looking forward to updates. Finally Rachael and Zacky will meet and eventually he will come around. Anyways love the story so far. You both are very talented.January 17th, 2012 at 05:52am
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I love this =]January 13th, 2012 at 04:59am
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Poor poor Rachel. ): But I'm glad there's finally a new update though. :D Can't wait for the next one. :)January 10th, 2012 at 08:46am
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I really like this story a lot. You guys are really talented. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Update soon!November 27th, 2011 at 11:29am
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Wait a minute, how come they're are very little comments on this story?! :O Anyways love the updats. =)November 19th, 2011 at 06:54pm
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LOL Jimmy's crazy AND hilarious! xD I love this story so far and can't wait for a new update! =DDNovember 7th, 2011 at 08:51pm
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Her parents are awful!
But this story is good so far! Can't wait for more :)November 7th, 2011 at 07:40pm -
HAHAHA Jimmy is effin crazy, I love that man lol
Aww poor Zacky too embarassed to tell his mommy he looooooves her in front of his friends lol
cant wait to see what happens next! =)November 7th, 2011 at 06:16pm -
Dammn her parents are fucked up! After I hit them, I would have run back to my room packed and locked it so they couldn't come in lol.
Anyways, hope shes ok, but why didn't she just go to her friend's house? That and then job hunting lolNovember 6th, 2011 at 09:24am
=D Haha Jimmy is funny.
His poor little shoe!
Awesome job.