Beast - Comments

Call_me_Dot (100)

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wow, i really love this story! Such a breath of fresh air and a wonderful plot and well written!

September 11th, 2012 at 07:26am

LucifersAdvocateIIII (100)

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This is great so far all I can recommend which I probably have no right to recommend anything is that you start the story a bit quicker, I found myself interested but also bored whilst I read several paragraphs of sitting in an empty room. You definitely gave the feel of the silent hesitation though. Good job on your story :D

August 6th, 2012 at 08:32am

DoubleInfinity (100)

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Great Plot, I see where your'e going with this one. I like the fact that its completly different and shows the true nature of a "vampire."

July 22nd, 2012 at 09:19pm

xXXxxRazorLinesxxXXx (100)

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COMENT VIRGINITY TAKEN! XD I like how this is written.... it's nice!

July 22nd, 2012 at 08:22pm