Lips of Deceit - Comments

BOOM. Bomb drop
*raises hand* I think it's her father too
It makes perfect sense he disappeared so he couldn't be caught
They're making progress "Call me Matt."
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god... matt's crazy about her... jeez. but he was brave enough to "tell" her...

aww! <3!!!

I like this so far

ok so I am only on chapter four and the very frequent use of explanation marks can get very annoying, in such a serious story at many points (to me or i guess in my head...) it sounds like he is excited when he is saying it or something weird... It's sort of like when people type in all capital letters.
Your plot is amazing, your characters are very well developed and I love the story but I can't sit and read it continuously like I want to.
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I am going to describe and stick with you through it and I hope you don't mind me giving your opinion. It really is an amazing story!

As soon as Caroline started talking, I didn't like her. She's annoying and whiny. Anyway, I'm shocked that Matt actually pushed Caroline away. I thought he'd give in, but good for him. But it's only a matter of time before something happens between him and Adrianne. Awesome update!

I'm shocked Matt pushed Caroline away
Something going to happen between Matt and Adrianne
One of them is going to break soon
I'm just throwing it out there that I don't like Caroline
Amazing chapter
Update soon

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You're more then welcome!!!

BTW Great Update!!! <3

Matt is just a jealous fuck lol. I like it. And Johnny only succeeded in pissing him off. And hard ons every morning? Someone wants some. But what's his ex doing there? Cliffhangers. -_- Instruments of torture lol. Update soon please. Oh, and sorry about your car window being broken and walkter and stuff stolen.

Two Weeks
I'm surprised she hasn't lost her mind or jumped Matt by now
I wonder what Caroline wants
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Uhuh! Someone is jealous!!! Matt's so cute!

Matt buying tampons was hilarious. Poor guy didn't know what to do, and that girl wasn't any help. But I want to know what's going to happen next! D: It's killing me! Update soonly please! ^.^

Is Matt jealous of Johnny?
That tampon part was funny
Great Chapter
Sexy picture
Update soon

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Matt's crazyyyyyyyy! I'm lovin' it !

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I love that you're doing two Matt chapters. :D And now I know for sure he's a good guy. I like seeing what he's thinking and what he knows. But I'm questioning Klaus's motives. The comment above mine has me thinking about that possibility as well. It makes sense. Can't wait for more! :D

I loved reading Matt's pov
What if Klaus wasn't the one who didn't wasn't her hurt?
What if Adrianne's father is really the boss and not Klaus?

Awesome as always, Sue! :D

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Sue <3 this is awesome :D
I love it, love it love it!! can't wait for the next one!! ;)

I'm really into you story and curious about what's going to happen next!

LOve the way this story is coming along. Can't wait for the next one :)

Have I told you how much I love this story? I love it a lot! She's not going easy on Matt, but it's hilarious. At least she's nice to Johnny. He doesn't deserve the mean. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D