Nice chapter! I liked it quite a lot. :) she needs to let loose more often. :) can't wait forthe next update
December 17th, 2011 at 05:43am
A False New Start - Comments
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pretty good story so far. i like all the stuff they did for orientation (target, concert that got rainedd on) because it totally happend at my university last year ;)November 15th, 2011 at 11:28pm
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Nice chapter. :) it's getting really good. Can't wait to find out more of this new boy :)November 8th, 2011 at 04:24am
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I like the story: :) your a really good writer, and I can't wait to see more. But there is one thing. YouTube want to look over the preview thing. If to want to hook people it has to be something that really appeals to your readers. When I first looked at the story, it didn't really catch my eye, but I like the twilight books, so I decided to read it, but the further I good te better it got. I hope to see more chapters soon!October 27th, 2011 at 07:01am
