i like this story im on chapter 10 right now and no you dont suck the only thing i would say is try not to use so many "I" statements in a row alot of writers ive seen do that its not just you but it just makes it sound more like a list than anything but ither han that youre doing great and like i said i like the story:)
I love the ending even tho I already read but of course the stupid servers crashed...bogus....anyhoo soooo Andy loves Vee still which left her speechless and I cant wait for the sequel I'm sooo excited :)
Love this chapter it was soo romantic wit Vee and Dj, it was funny when the girls were getting ready....I love the dresses btw.....I wonder what Andy wants to talk about with Vee I hope it's not something stupid like I want u back becuz the way I look at it u lost ur chance when u told Vee tht u had a girlfriend or if u r apologizing and want to be friends again and not try to sabatoage her relationship with Dj thn maybe she can forgive u idk whats goin to happen can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I love this chapter it was soo good......I'm sooo glad tht Grannie bought Vee a dress and wat is in the box and what is DJ doing in the guest house???? I can't wait to read what happens......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Holy fuck. Let me just start with that his chapter was really well written. Like one of your all time best chapters written, seriously. I'm so excited, I think I know what happens and I'm excited as shit. So granny is in on it? Huh. Love Andy and DJ but Andy is kind of being an asshole and DJ is being too fucking adorable not to love. Amber is a bitch. Vee please don't go all bulimic on me. Elise is one to love. Who the fuck is going to be the new bassist and drummer? ANDY MAKE A MOVE ALREADY. KISS THAT BITCH! haha sorry about that. :) This is a very long comment. Oh i really want to see her dress and if what i think is going to happen will i have a feeling i will really really want to see the dress. LIKE REALLY!. Oh and the part where Vee said that Jimmy was the epitome of obnoxiousness. HAHAHA Seriously though this chapter was very well written. I could see it happening and I was grinning from ear to ear. Oh and because I'm a really cheesy person that likes to tell the truth even though it may be embarrassing my heart was beating really fast towards the end there. HAVE FUN READING ALL THIS! With much love, Izzy.
Sooo poor DJ he can't even get laid if u paid him...u hav crazy protective Jimmy nd cockblocking Elise yea there is no such luck at all......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Sorry I commented late! :) I do the same thing as Vee, don't I? YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE MONO. and DJ, get SOME! hahah, just kidding. Maybe. :0 Update soon, or I'll come murder your sick ass.
Well well well wat do we hav here...I spy wit my lil eyes a jealous Andy and a love struck Vee I'm likin this right now tlk about drama in the house but not only tht but Dj love Vee too so it should be all good in the hood in his nd Vee's relationship......I didn't expect the sister to be datin Ashley tht caught me off guard a lil bit but I'm glad tht Vee gave him a warning.....but Andy dear y gettin so worked up about Vee's relationship it shouldn't bother u especially since u already hav a girlfriend sooo worry about ur own relationship not Vee's ok butt out of it sweetie before someone mainly u will get hurt......I can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I just got caught up wit the story sooo yay for tht....I'm glad tht Vee nd DJ r finally dating jeez it took them forever lol.......Vee nd Andy r now friends after they tlked..........who is Elise's boyfriend I just hope tht it's not Vee's ex boyfriend Jason becuz tht would be just an epic fail I hope it's a great smoking hot guy who treats her right......cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
aaaahhh cliffhanger!!!! Dammit, I wanna know who the mystery man is, and wondering how much of a heinous bitch Vee's mum is gonna to be DJ. Can't wait for the next update