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  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

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    I still don't get t the warm feeling for Oz, such a bad case of mentality that boy has. But it intrigues me to no end. More soon please.
    December 20th, 2011 at 01:22am
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    Come at me bro
    Sorry, I cackled a bit at that.
    Bad, bad Oz. He's seriously freaking the boy out.
    Oh, the fun begins. NYAHAHAHA >:]
    December 13th, 2011 at 04:39pm
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    I will come at you with a comment :). Is that alright? ;).
    But anyway. This chapter was actually really intense :)). I find it interesting that Harper moved away because of ghosts and now finds himself face to face with a ghost. Does he not know that ghosts can and will follow you around? You may not feel them there but they are there. If you can see ghosts, its a hard thing to grasp and all you want is a normal life. But you were given that gift for a reason; to help people move on.
    December 13th, 2011 at 12:46pm
  • bones n' feathers.

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    O:
    whoa
    xD
    update soonnnn!!! :D
    December 9th, 2011 at 03:06am
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    Aww bad, bad Oz. But finally!!
    Can't wait for what's happening next. :)
    December 7th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • yurio

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    Ok, I love Oz. (:
    December 7th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • Criala

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    Oz is having way too much fun with this.
    But it is giving me chuckles.
    I loved it! <3
    December 6th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • ThatKidNamedCarson

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    Omfg.. This story is gonna be beast!!! :) but yeah... Never thought i would ever read a ghost : human slash... If Oz even really qualifies as a ghosty.. But yeah... Since Kory mentioned him does that mean he can see ghosts too? Or is it like how people say kids can see otherworldly stuff... Like angels, spirits..etc. And it goes away as they get older.....? But besides that....... I really like this story!! Update soon? :D
    November 29th, 2011 at 03:27am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    Can i has le more?
    <3
    I LOVEEEE THIS STORY! :D
    November 28th, 2011 at 02:34pm
  • Make the Voices Stop

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    I had that image in my head when Harper looked under the bed and saw something... Did anyone else look under their bed after that? xDD I'm such a kid x) So does this mean that little Kory has the ability to? :) Yes?

    Please update ^-^
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:39pm
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    I just realized something when I read the first chapter again, that Oz is not much as a ghost but is just cursed. He didn't die of natural death and he wasn't found, means he's still intact.

    Oh man, I think I just loved this story ten times more, meh that was kinda slow of me not to notice it the first time. (hope no one reads this)
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:08pm
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    Ahahaha I love this so much.
    It made my hair prickle but damn that was necessary. *o*
    I'm anticipating their meeting so much.
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • yurio

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    Kory is so adorable. (:
    November 26th, 2011 at 05:30pm
  • Thor

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    I really like this story, ist a keeper <3 I love Oz like alot xD, I just wish we could get some background info about him soon, ya'know like how old he looks, how he died etc, and He needs to meet harper face to face! Im excited for that to happen :')
    November 26th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    You don't need to be searching for ghosts. Ghosts come to you for a variety of reasons :). You can live a normal life as you want but they will be there.
    Hm, I wonder why Oz is staying in the toddler's room. I would stay in the attic. A whole attic to myself? Fuck yeah I am gonna stay there.
    Awe why wouldn't we love this? <333.
    November 26th, 2011 at 02:08pm
  • missmuffinpantsx

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    This...is...supercalifragilisticexpialidocious amazing for just starting. ^.^
    You two should definitely keep writing it!
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • we are not amused;

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    This is fantastic! So good <3
    November 21st, 2011 at 03:26am
  • xmydecemberx

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    Hahah Oz is soo gonna mess with him ;).
    November 19th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • atypical

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    GHOST STORY SLASH?!
    my life is complete.
    update soon please :)
    November 18th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

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    SCREW HER.
    Sorry I was just laughing so much at that.
    I keep wondering why he couldn't see Oz. Geez. This is too much.
    November 14th, 2011 at 11:23pm
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