The Girl - Comments

well i keep going for comment swap and i keep getting you! not that i'm complaining. this is wonderful. truly wonderful. i love the way that you write slightly happier pieces like this, and i LOVED the repeated description of her.

it definitely definitely flowed, and it comes across like she's almost mystical, like some perfect fairy or something, i don't know. i just love your writing so much. <3

This totally flowed. I like it alot. It was interesting and different. I also liked the layout. Its just like the other story you entered in my contest "What did I do?" Something along that lines of that. But it perfectly descried the way how someone has fallen in love for another person.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.

This was a very... interesting piece. I liked it.