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First of all, I love the lyrics in the summary. I adore that song!

Your description is amazing. I feel like I can totally see the characters. You really capture characters' personalities. And you really like writing about girls who like to read, don't you? And I like the names that you use for your characters.

Please don't take this the wrong way, it is only my opinion. But your use of the word darling seems a little weird. Only because I can picture them with tea cups and talking in British accents. It just doesn't seem like one of the pet names that people their age might use? Please don't take this the wrong way. It's probably just me. And it does seem like her sister does use pet names, so it's probably the way that she is.

How adorable! That's so cute how Pen agreed for a Barnes and Noble gift card.

I adore your characters' personalities and how you really make each one of your characters in your stories very different from each other. This story is amazing!

I feel so bad for Pen, but the update was great. Write more!

Loved the update!
lol. Damn, that sounds like torture. Poor Pen. 'Is it too soon for her to get a nose job?' Really? lol. She can't look that bad.
And glasses are awesome! :P I happen to wear them. :P They make you look sophisticated. XD lol. Actually, I wish I wore contacts. I hate them. :P
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

I really enjoyed the first two chapters!
I hope to see more of this story soon!
It's a very well-written story and I was pulled into the story, quickly.
I can't wait to see a new update and keep up the good work, darling! :

I really like this and I can see how the banner fits in with the theme. I'm very excited for this. It seems like a story I could easily fall into.

I like the layout of this, the banner pickture made me a laugh a little bit. That shirt is cute and funny. :)

I like the concept of this whole story. I could just picture a younger sister wanting to make her older sister "cool and popular". Your writing style is really easy to follow and you do a good job with description. I have a feeling that the younger sister might get her older sister into some sort of trouble.

I like the names you chose for the characters aswell, they are pretty names.

I'm going to subscribe to this, please update soon if you can. Keep up the good wrok!! :D

So... I just stumbled across this story, and decided to check it out. :)
It sounds like it's going to be very interesting. :) A very unique idea you have going for it, alright.
Can't wait to see what you have in store!
Definitely... subscribed! :D

Oh my god, I love Wicked. I saw the original in New York a few years back. As soon as I saw the title that song was the first thing that popped into my mind.

Anyway, the layout is so pretty and girly! I love the picture, it goes with the theme so well! The imagery is freakin' amazing. I could really picture everything that was going on in such little amount of words. I've always thought that color is the key to imagining and describing. The violin, that was just beautiful. I've never seen anyone describe a person from a violin.

I wasn't sure if you meant tassels of the blanket, you may have misplaced the 'e.' Very well written.

I wasn't sure about this, but as soon as I read the summary, I was excited. I love short summaries. It captivates me and really gets me ready for the story.

Chapter one was awesome. I like Pen and I can totally relate to her. I think a lot people can. And relateable characters are important. Her sister may turn out to be sweet, I could see that. She probably thinks shes doing her sister a big favor.

This was awesomely written. I liked the style and I liked the way it flowed. It's realistic and I cant wait for an update. I'm subscribing of course.

I didn't see any grammatical errors. Which is always good. I like how you quoted actual literature. It's a nice touch.

Good job. :)

Becky seems a bit like a bitch, if you don't mind me saying. I'm not so fond of her, but I do like Pen. It's all pretty and stuff, and you quoted Wicked, so I'm on board.

You didn't tell me you were working on something new!

This seems like it'll be really cool - plus the layout is pretty awesome. And I giggled at Pen's social awkwardness.

ping? I think you meant hoping, darling.

But this seems like it'll be fun. Maybe even with a little sardonic humour, darker undertones?

Also, the story? Seems ridiculously familiar. Have I read it?

But anyway, I'm pretty much a grown-up Pen at this point, except I stare at my computer screen. And I liked the way you described Becky - it's not what you'd expect, but it works. Nice job.

First off, I love the layout. Its calm and the colours are really pretty.
I think my favourite part of the chapter was when you described Becky as a violin, the descriptions are brilliant and like Ghostface, I love your writing style and think the story could go really well.
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I love your writing style!
I think this story could go really well, do carry on.