April 7th, 2013 at 05:36am
I'm Coming Home to You - Comments
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update soon please~!!!!April 7th, 2013 at 05:28am
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I love it! The only thing I can say is commas. Commas are pretty cool. Not that you don't use them! Just, try and use them a little more? I know what it feels like when someone tries to tell you about grammar on here, it sucks. Just trying to help!
I do love it though, Rose/10th doesn't get the love it deserves from the rest of us Whovians sometimes.December 15th, 2012 at 09:36pm -
I love this. <3March 3rd, 2012 at 02:10pm
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Sorry, I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for the Doctor's and Rose's meeting, I'm sure you'll do it justice. Please update soon :)November 18th, 2011 at 11:32pm
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Hi, I'm sorry for my absence, school has seemed to have dragged me down. But I'm back and just finished reading your last chapter. I really liked it, I love the new character, Lily and I like how you've made everything fit with Darlik Sec. I'mNovember 18th, 2011 at 11:31pm
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I loved this chapter! Everything's flowing really well and it's brilliant! I really like the new layout, I think it's perfect. The only problem is, is that it's kind of hard to read the writing at the top. But apart from that, it's ace!
You said apartment! American word I picked up on.
I can't wait for the update, I'm really interested to see what happens next. Poor Rose seems to have gotten herself in a struggle. :)October 29th, 2011 at 06:41pm -
Ha ha, I picked up on the 'pants' thing too. American words are so strange.. pants... guys...couch!! And I loved this chapter so much, it was brilliant! And I love love love love love Captain Jack, thank you so much for bringing him in!!
I look forward to your next update :)October 28th, 2011 at 05:12pm -
Kay I really do love this, but I saw one little funny moment. Brits call underwear "pants" so when you wrote about rose putting the torch in her pants were you meaning trousers or jeans perhaps? XDDD I am so enjoying this AND OMG CAPTAIN JACK ;DOctober 27th, 2011 at 05:59am
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Ooooo, I'm glad a discovered this, I've been waiting for a really good Doctor Who fanfic to come along so thank you. I'm glad it's Rose too cus' I loved Rose!! And I love the way you've made everything link together, it's wonderful.
I'll be keeping up with this
Update soon?October 26th, 2011 at 06:48pm -
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awesome story more soon?
Disenchanted Lies.
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Probably not. This was a fan fic written after an emotional turmoil of Rose leaving. It's more or less stuck in purgatory. Judgement Day however will be updated regularly.