Dear Mommy, - Comments

i really like it
like the first comment said
u should say things that an 8 year old would say
imma subscribe to it i like it

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AWWW!!

Poor girl!!

How can she be a genius child when she doesn't even know that what her father is doing is wrong??

Update soon!!!

i dont want to write this with u. its ur story and im not always the most dedicated person when it comes to writing. its too hard at times with the perils of life and such. but im always glad to offer a suggestion if needed... good luck. hehe genius child. funny stuff.

Mmm true... It's hard for me to dumb things down to that extent... but I'll try! She could be like... a genius child... even though she never went to school..
You're welcome to write this with me if you want =P I really don't know where this is going.. I have a few basic ideas but.. yeah.
Hehe, well, I've got 4 done.. so I'll dumb them down as much as I can.. and post them! You hopefully wont have to wait long.

yea older would be good. but then think if u made her like 5 her so... then she wuld be all innocent and not understand why her daddy does it. it wuld make it so much more depressing. ah ill shut up now. its ur story. oh i will subscribe so continuation is essential hehe.

Mm, I was kinda thinking that... and I was gonna try and dumb it down a bit... (if you get what I mean,) but it sorta wouldn't come out xD
Maybe I'll make her a ltitle older?

hey its really good and i like it and all but i was just wondering would a 8 yr old girl honestly speak like that? i thought that she would have more of a sense of innocence about it. but it has awesome potential and i look forward to more. sorry if i hurt ur feelings. didnt mean to....