She Will Be Named - Comments

sharkbites (100)

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This is beautiful.

December 27th, 2011 at 08:24pm

risque; (100)

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I absolutely loved it. Nothing was expected. I love how you didnt end in a fairy tale ending. You detailed the story beautifully. I couldnt find any mistakes. I also really like the layout. It was a bit blinding because of the black, but that happens. I would say my favorite line but, it was all wonderfully written.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.

December 12th, 2011 at 01:35am

lostpuzzlepiece (100)

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Very good! I loved it!!:)
I hate Jean. :( he sucks.

November 18th, 2011 at 11:15pm

ensembletherain (100)

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What?! So she died?! I wish she wouldn't have even thought of going through it cause he treated her like crap and cheated... poor ava

November 9th, 2011 at 05:19am

fallen__girl (100)

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this was really good! the ending was so sad. i've read a lot of anorexia and belimua (spelled that wrong) stories but not like this, it was good. good job!

November 6th, 2011 at 08:51am

kid.ninja15 (100)

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I am in love with this story. It is very good, I've read plenty anorexia stories, but this is the best I've ever seen, nobody has ever written something this good. Keep it up, I love this.

November 6th, 2011 at 05:45am