She Will Be Named - Comments

This is beautiful.

I absolutely loved it. Nothing was expected. I love how you didnt end in a fairy tale ending. You detailed the story beautifully. I couldnt find any mistakes. I also really like the layout. It was a bit blinding because of the black, but that happens. I would say my favorite line but, it was all wonderfully written.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.

Very good! I loved it!!:)
I hate Jean. :( he sucks.

What?! So she died?! I wish she wouldn't have even thought of going through it cause he treated her like crap and cheated... poor ava

this was really good! the ending was so sad. i've read a lot of anorexia and belimua (spelled that wrong) stories but not like this, it was good. good job!

I am in love with this story. It is very good, I've read plenty anorexia stories, but this is the best I've ever seen, nobody has ever written something this good. Keep it up, I love this.