Dead by Dawn - Comments

Whitney has feelings for Zacky :D
FINALLY

Awww, she has feelings for him. :)

i love this story - you write extremely well and all of the characters are very three dimensional and easy to relate to. Can't wait to read more!

It seems things are going smoothly for now. I wonder when the action will happen. I'm excited to see them in action :D

Awe Zacky is so sweet!
I hope they dont get attacked during the night though
<3 Michele

aww i love your story so much! Always wanted to write one like that cause i am a huge fan of movies or tvshow with zombies lol but i just don't have lots of imagination.. Well not like you anyway :)

Awww, they are too cute together.

it was a bad idea to stay behind. I'm happy Whitney is there for Zacky. He really needs someone to listen to him.

Hopefully they don't get ambushed by zombies like Night Of The Living Dead.
Because that would suck

Thanks goodness they didn't get attacked as they were walking.
I hoep this farmhouse is as safe as they think it is
<3 Michele

I love Whitney and Zacky's relationship already. It's simply too adorable. I also like the fact that she's not dissing Gena. Obviously, she was important to him in some way and Whitney's respecting that.

I feel so bad for Zack! He's heartbroken and it kinda breaks my heart. loved the update!

The fact that he did care about Gena makes this story so different. He's going to be healing, whcih will be hard to do when infection is all around. I just hope that Whitney can make everything better for him!

I feel so bad for Zacky. He's blaming himself for Gena, Matt B, and John's death. All he wanted to do was protect her and that's what he did until the end. I hope when they go find supplies and stuff, no one gets a bite to the arm/leg/torso/neck/where ever.

I agree with Jason but at the same time I agree with Zacky.
I hope don't loose anyone else along the way.
<3 Michele

Aww, Zacky needs to stop worrying because everything is going to be just fine. Well, I'm sure more people are gonna die. but maybe just maybe he and Whitney can find a nice little love shack somewhere!

I was about to have a heart attack when they were walking towards the bathroom
I thought that a crowd of Zombis were going to attack both of them
<3 Michele

Kayla and Shaun are so cute.
Zacky and Whitney are getting closer, me gusta.

Aw Shaun and Kayla, adorable. It's messy to have a relationship when shit just got like that D:
but I'm happy zacky and whitney are closer now.

he's so vulnerable :/ makes me sad
i loved the update though!