Pretty in Pink - Comments

This is a really great story. :D I really enjoyed reading it and could picture everything that was going on. ^_^

It's really cute and sad :3
I really like it ^^

Wow, this is really sweet, but at the same time, sad and tragic. I could really relate with the line, "It didn’t give you your happy ending like in the movies." because it's so true. One thing I noticed was that you switched between the names Nick and Blane, and that was a little confusing, so I would change that. Your writing style is descriptive so I could imagine the whole thing. I like how at the end she has a hope to cling to, waiting for him to return, which makes me wonder if he ever does. Anyways, very good one-shot! =)

Really cute :) but sad